新托福独立口语例题解析

        口语题目：Describe a person that you admire.Eplain why you sdmire this person. include details and example to support

　　学生回答："I admire Nelson Mandela for several reasons. First, he is an excellent speaker, and his ideas inspire many people. Second, he spent over twenty years in jail as a political prisoner. However, that experience didn't stop his dream. Third, he became the president of South Africa when he was seventy years old. I admire Nelson Mandela because he was a strong leader for his country at a time of change."

　　分析：下面哪些陈述适用于学生的回答?找出所有正确的。

　　学生的观点很难懂。

　　每个句子都表达了一个完整的思想。

　　学生用错了一些词。

　　每一个观点都有恰当的细节展开。____学生的表达很连贯。

　　如果不考虑发音的话，大多数人会觉得学生的回答清晰而且连贯。在开头，学生就清晰地阐述了观点：

　　"I admire Nelson Mandela for several reasons."

　　接着，学生给出了三个原因：

　　"First, he is an excellent speaker, and "Second, he spent over twenty years his ideas inspire many people."

　　n jail as a political prisoner. However, that experience didn't stop his dream."

　　"Third, he became the president of South Africa when he was seventy years old."

　　每个句子都表达了一个完整的思想，每一点都有恰当的细节来展开。学生的表达也很连贯。过渡词first，second和third使得学生的观点清晰且连贯。

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　　给分标准：

        1.将有两位经过培训的评分人员听考生的回答录音。他们根据考生的以下表现给分： (责任编辑：admin)