1.本次考试难度中等。
2.整体分析:
Task 1表格,动态数据图,三个年份不同种类能源的使用量,重点描述出不同种类能源的变化。
注意点:1.筛选关键数据并以清晰的次序进行描写 2.句型灵活多样性
趋势变化表达:
1.变化主题(能源名)+V(变化)+ 数据
2变化主题(能源名)+see/experience/witness +a/an +n(变化) + 数据
3.A/an + n (变化) +be seen /found+ in +能源名+数据
4.时间段+see/experience/witness+ a/an +n(变化) + in +能源名+数据
5.There be + a/an +n(变化)+ in +能源名+数据
3. Task2:科技类话题,
题目翻译:因为电脑科技可以替代公共图书馆的功能,所以花钱维护公共图书馆是一种浪费钱的举动。同意不同意?
从题型上来讲,这是非常典型的“同意不同意类”的题目。在分析这个题目的时候应该注意分析其题眼所在。整个题目是一个因果关系的命题,即“因为电脑科技可以替代公共图书馆的功能,所以花钱维护公共图书馆是一种浪费钱的举动”。考生需要论证自己同意或者不同意这个命题,在仔细分析后不难发现这个命题有两条主线:1。因果关系是否成立;2。电脑科技是否能够取代公共图书馆。文章应该将上述两条主线都要提到,这样才能证有较高的文章解析程度。
在分析好题目之后就可以开始谋篇布局。一般来讲结构有两种,即常见的“五段式”或者“四段式”。“五段式”是指Introduction和Conclusion各写一段,然后文章主体部分用三个理由段落来论证自己观点,而“四段式”的差别就是主体段落只用两个理由段落来论证。“五段式”结构层次感强,作者表态鲜明有力,较为推荐这种结构,即
段 引言:描述题目背景,提出观点
第二段: 不否认电脑科技可以取代公共图书馆的一部分功能,但远远不足以完全取代其社会地位。
第三段:公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性之一。
第四段:公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性之二。 第五段 总结:综上所述花钱维护公共图书馆不是一种浪费钱的行为。
从上面的结构中可以看到,题目中的两条主线都有详细的文字进行论述,这样一来考生的文章析题程度(Task Response)的分数就会相对较高。
Introduction:In many cities, the library is an important building, providing a place for people to read, study and gain information. However, some people claim that it is waste of money for maintaining a library in an era when the Internet is accessible to all. I believe that a library cannot be substituted by computer technology.
Body1:
Ts:诚然(There is no denying that)computer and Internet可以高效环的实现public libraries的一些功能。
Ss:无需waste a great of time on the road to a library just for a book, 借助于网络可以轻松阅读whatever they
want, 不受time and geographical limitation in this new study resource, 也不用担心超期还书的问题。此
外,就环境而言,reading from Internet 无疑save a large quantities of wood resources which are consumed for
paper making,相对public libraries 来说减少了资源的消耗。
Body2:
Ts: In spite of this, computer technology 并不会replace the function of public libraries.
Ss:be indispensable for those who lack computer skills or even may not afford to own a computer
部分人群比如老年人他们并不具备skilled computer skills, 如果公共图书馆被取代,他们就cannot be able to search the information in terms of effectiveness and efficiency.
从经济划算的角度考虑,e-books 往往inefficient and potentially more costly than print books
a library card is 200 RMB / year 而one iPad’s price 往往equal to 18 years’ library card. 显而易见(It is obvious that)多的人可以afford a library card than an iPad and can an iPad be used for 18 years without any breakdown? Besides,众所周知Computers that have old versions of Microsoft Word or Adobe Reader which cannot open or read files from the new versions. E-books that are data and file-based may have to be re-loaded or re-purchased as software improves.
Body3:
Ts: Moreover, as a necessary part of our social life, public libraries 并不只是局限于借书阅读, but also meet the community ’s needs that cannot be provided by e-books
Ss: 一些人利用public libraries for the purpose of book clubs, reading hard copy of magazines and newspapers
一些人和朋友一起relax for reading magazines with friends , 有些just come for a cool spot in a hot summer. (It
is no exaggeration to say that) The experience of sitting in a library is different from sitting in front of a computer
and browsing websites at home. Therefore, 在快节奏,高压力的现代生活方式下,对爱阅读的人们而言,去public libraries for reading and obtaining information可以说是一种很好的放松娱乐方式。Apart from this, 在很多城市,公共图书馆也是地标性建筑,representing the cultural identity of a city.
Conclusion:尽管the role of public libraries is challenged by information technology, 并不意味着其失去存在的价值。考虑到成本和环境,可以适当cut down the collection of paper books and introduce some e-books.
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