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2016年12月10日雅思考试写作回顾

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20161210日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文:pie chart

 

大作文:Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly controlled the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

朗阁讲师杨程点评:

1.本次考试难度较低

2.整体分析

Task 1:动态饼图,1995年和2005年欧洲某个国家一个home的居住人数的变化。

注意:1.选择重要数据优先描述;2,动态图,重点体现变化趋势;3.注意是过去的时间点,动词使用过去式。

相关表达:

1、The percentage of A in .... is higher than ....

2、A was ... times as many as B. A 是B 的几倍

3、The proportion of A increased/ decreased

4、时间段+ witness a(n) increase/decrease in the proportion of A.

 

3.Task 2环境类话题

题目翻译:一些人认为每个人都有权利可以随意使用干净的水,另一些人认为政府应该干涉限制水资源的使用,因为水资源是有限的。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

从话题上来说,属于环境类,水资源是一个很常见的话题,考生平时应当注意积累常见词组的表达。从类型上来说,讨论双边类的题目应该注意两种观点并不一定是针锋相对的,考生只要从合理的角度讨论各个观点,言之有理即可。

从结构上来说,可以采取四段式的写法:

段:介绍背景、引入话题、改写题目。

第二段:讨论种观点的合理性,可以从正反两面辩证地论述。

第三段:讨论第二种观点的合理性,可以从正反两面辩证地论述,增加文章的充实度。

第四段:提出自己的观点,同时结束全文。

 

Introduction:

Fresh water is considered as one of the most valuable resources in this planet .As water shortage has become an increasingly severe problem in many parts of the world, conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not people should be entitled to use fresh water randomly. This essay will specifically analyze both sides. 

Body 1:

Ts:一些人的观点是,随意取用洁净的水是可以理解并接受的。From some people’s point of view, it is acceptable and understandable to draw on fresh water resources at their own wills. 

Ss: 首先,作为消费者,as consumers,他们已经支付了水费and are willing to pay more money for the usage of water.因此,他们可以将水用于任何用途。therefore, they can use fresh water for any purpose ranging from daily life to enterprise production.此外,这些人还可能将水资源看作是无穷尽的。Besides, some people still hold that fresh water resources are infinite and renewable.即使是那些意识到水资源短缺的人,even for those who realize the pressing condition caused by the shortage of fresh water, 他们也盲目地将希望寄托在新技术手段上,they are overoptimistic to rely on the cutting-edge technology to transform the sea water into fresh water.

Body 2:

Ts:尽管如此,其他人认为政府有义务干预水资源的使用。However, others believe the government has the obligation to intervene the utilization of fresh water.

Ss:考虑到日益严重的水资源危机,Considering the deteriorating water crisis, 减少消耗和护水资源是当务之急,it is urgent to reduce water consumption and conserve fresh water resource.政府应该采取有效措施来控制水资源的使用,for instance,如果提高水费,if the authorities could raise the water price for the part over normal level, 或者设置工厂用水的 高值,or set the maximum quantity of water consumption in factories,或者针对浪费水资源的人采取惩罚措施,or penalize those who waste fresh water indiscriminately,那么用水量的下降就是可以期待的,then water usage is expected to decline.

Conclusion:

My view point is that 政府有正当理由采取必要措施来解决水资源危机,it is justified for the government to take necessary measures to tackle the water crisis.首先要做的就是提升公众的意识,The first step is to raise people’s awareness of water conservation,使社会大众意识到问题的严重性。只有这样才能证政策好地实施,only by this step can the government’s policies be better implemented.

考试预测:

1.小作文:重点关注地图、线图、柱图

2.大作文:重点关注环类教育类科技类话题。

3.重点浏览11-14年写作机经,可借助《范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

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