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2017年7月15日雅思考试写作回顾

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2017年7月15日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文: table

大作文:In the modern society, some people believe the parents should read or tell stories to .Others think that parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV or movies by themselves. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

朗阁李佳佳点评

1.本次考试难度中等。

2.整体分析:

Task 1表格,动态数据图,the percentage of main types of dwelling in three regions in 2001 and 2006,重点描述出不同种类的变化。

注意点:1.筛选关键数据并以清晰的次序进行描写  2.句型灵活多样性

 

趋势变化表达:

1.变化主题(types of dwelling)+V(变化)+ 数据

2变化主题(types of dwelling)+see/experience/witness +a/an +n(变化) + 数据

3.A/an + n (变化) +be seen /found+ in +types of dwelling+数据

4.时间段+see/experience/witness+ a/an +n(变化) + in +types of dwelling+数据

5.There be + a/an +n(变化)+ in +types of dwelling+数据

 

3. Task 2科技+教育类话题

题目翻译:现代社会,有人认为应该是父母给孩子讲故事,而有人认为父母不需要这样做,因为孩子可以可以自己看书,电视或电影。讨论双方观念并且给出你的观点。

从题型上来讲,这是非常典型的“讨论双边”的新题目,文章结构分为四段,中间主体两段分别讨论双方观点,结尾段表明自己的观点,即

段  引言:描述题目背景

第二段: 讨论A方观点--- reasons for supporting  A

第三段:讨论B方观点--- reasons for supporting  B
第四段:总结:表明自己的观点。 

 

Introductionintroduce the topic (lead-in sentence+extend).

Body1:

Ts: Paraphrase opinion A. (Some people put forward the view that…)

Ss: parents reading or telling stories to children,有助于(contribute to)family bonding   

当下in modern society, a sense of alienation in families increase, 因为很多working parents 不得不花大量时间和精力在工作上(devote to), 疏于spend more time with their children,而reading together是一种很好的途径(an enjoyable and easy way for parents to take time off to accompany their children)孩子会usually feel loved and wanted by this means. 这样,父母和孩子会有自然良性的沟通(generate sincere communication)尤其在遇到问题时。

 

Body2:

Ts:Paraphrase opinion B. (However, others maintain that…)

Ss:一方面,快节奏高压力的现代社会,父母may fail to have time to share reading time with their children, those alternatives would be much easier for busy working parents.

另一方面,children can be free and independent to make their own choices. 而且,这些alternatives 因为有more vivid pictures and sounds, 孩子tend to be more attracted by those modern ways and channels. 然而,.由于孩子辨别力弱好奇心强,又缺乏父母的陪伴和引导(accompany and guidance form parents), may be easily influenced by bad behavior and violent images or information from those channels

 

ConclusionTo sum up , it is better for parents as well as their children to have reading time together,这样不仅可以ensure quality family time 而且有助于孩子的psychological development.

 

考试预测

1. 小作文:重点关注流程图、地图

2. 大作文:多关注科技,社会生活,政府类话题

3. 重点浏览11-14年写作机经,可借助《范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

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