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2017年9月16日雅思写作回顾

时间:2017-09-18 15:29来源:朗阁小编作者:don

 

2017年9月16日雅思写作回顾

小作文: The wind energy generated by wind in India, Denmark, Germany and  the United States from 1985 to 2000.

大作文:An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their lives.Is it a positive or negative  development?

朗阁吴丹琪点评

1. 本次考试难度简单

 

2. task1:动态柱图。除了四个国家各自动态句型,归纳相似相反,还要比较各    个年份产能大小。

相关表达:1) sth.showed an opposite/similar trend, where ...

           2)  Sth. witnessed a significant rise, after which a steady decline was found during....

           3) A was the most productive..., which experienced a ..trend...

           4) The smallest production of wind energy was by employees working in ...

 

 

 

3. task2常见社会工作话题。“越来越多的人换好几次工作&居住地”利弊题。

          可以从为什么会换工作和居住地去考虑,支持利大于弊。

 

Body:一、经常换工作有问题:公司忠诚度和适应新环境。

         二、换工作好处:毕业生需要多了解行业。获得多技能,经验、人脉。丰富简历,提高竞争力。没有一成不变的工作环境。

      三、交通便利和远程工作允许人们移居,享受高的教育、医疗等。

观点立意:年轻的时候需要磨练提升体验,所以利大于弊。而中年以后可以稳定下来养家。

                         

参考范文:

Introduction:很常见It is quite prevalent that跳槽job hoppingand 搬家the change of accommodation已经成为numerous individuals’ preference. 尽管有些人stick to 一成不变的工作sedentary work,我认为变化能带来rewardingbenefits.

 

Body 1:一些频繁换工作的人suffer from certain problems.To explain, 频繁换工作Frequent change in occupation意味着对公司忠诚度少means mitigated loyalty toward the original companies,这会被employers在recruitment时考虑到,从而影响就业竞争力。相反,坚持同一份工作的人take an advantage of 熟悉工作,tend to get good job security甚至升职promotion.另外,需要花时间适应新环境和新同事it issome indispensable time that getting accustomed to the new working environment and new colleagues needs.(强调句)

 

Body 2:然而,对某些人,尤其是young graduates来说,换工作是个提升竞争力的feasible strategy. To be specific, 接触到不同的人脉和行业知识技能The exposure tomore professional knowledge, skills and specialists 让一张白纸的职场新人得到职业提升allows those fresh men who are blind in career prospect to make further progress.假如不去拓展自己Lacking the broadened horizon, 他们学到的有限的知识绝不可能一直满足不断发展的工作需求。

 

Body 3:交通便利和远程工作The convenience intransport and the possibility in teleworking brought by 科技发展grantcity dwellers the freedom of settling downwherever they are fond of, maybe for the sake of high quality education and alivable environment,

 

Personally, it is an favorable alternative for the majority of young people in need to choose variable occupations. 而人到中年后可以减少变换工作或居住地,为了维持家庭稳定。

 

旧题回顾:(OG Test1 Task2)

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss.

 

考试预测

1. 小作文:重点关注线图、流程图。

2. 大作文:多关注旅游文化,媒体广告,犯罪类话题

 

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