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小作文：饼图 大作文：Most of world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 朗阁讲师汪菁点评 1. 本次考试难度适中。 2. 整体分析： Task 1 饼图 注意：：1.饼图需注意观察和描述图中各区域之间的百分比差异，以及相同区域在各饼图之间的百分比变化或发展;2.注意时态的统一;3.需要在第二段或者结尾段总结数据的总体特征(overview) 倍数关系的相关表达： 1. 两倍：double, two times, twofold 2. 三倍：triple, three times, threefold 3. 四倍: quadruple, four times, fourfold 动词“占”的表达：account for, hold, make up, take up, constitute, comprise, represent 约数表达： The majority of… Most of… A considerable number of… A minority of… Just over… Slightly more than…/less than…. Nearly half… Task 2 社会类话题 题目翻译：世界上大多数问题都是由于人口过多造成的。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这个说法? 开头段：采用同义替换的方式改写开头并给出个人观点 Introduction: Mankind is now faced with various problems including poverty, pollution, crimes and so on. In my point of view, some, but not most of these problems are relevant to over-population. 人类现在面临各种问题，包括贫困，污染，犯罪等等。我认为，有一些，但并非所有的这些问题都与人口过多有关。 Body 1: In some less developed countries, the growth of food supply is insufficient to feed the rapidly increasing population. If encountered with natural disasters and bad harvest, numerous people will die of famine. In some cases, the large starving population makes the international donation insignificant. Over-population also puts a strain on the environment. Deforestation, over-grazing and over-cultivation are common in some regions of the world, and the purpose is to obtain more resources to meet people’s demand. The large population means huge quantities of materials and fuels consumed and waste products produced correspondingly. There are piles of wastes to be dispose of, both in the city and countryside, causing serious pollution to the environment. 在一些欠发达国家，粮食供应的增长率不足以满足迅速增长的人口需求。如果遇到自然灾害或是收成欠佳，大量的饥饿人口会使国际捐赠显得微不足道。人口过多同时也给环境带来压力。森林砍伐，过度放牧和过度耕种在某些地区也很常见，其目地是获得更多的资源以满足人们的需求。人口过多意味着消耗大量的材料和燃料，相应的也会产生废物。在城市和乡村都有大量的废弃物需要处理，这对环境造成了严重污染。 Body 2: However, it is unfair to say that most of problems worldwide are associated with population. In some countries, poverty would have been addressed, if the governance could be improved. Imperfect tax system cannot guarantee the even distribution of wealth, with the gap between the rich and poor gradually widening. Another example is cross-border crimes such as smuggling and drug-trafficking. Driven by perpetrators’ greed and evil thoughts, these criminal conducts have become rampant in some regions, partly for lack of cooperation in combating crimes among different countries. Obviously, we cannot blame over-population for the above-mentioned problems. 然而，说世界上大多数问题与人口有关是不公平的。在一些国家，如果可以积极治理，就会解决贫困问题。不完善的税收制度不能保证财富的均匀分配，贫富差距逐渐扩大。另一个例子就是走私和贩毒等跨境犯罪。在肇事者的贪婪和邪恶思想的驱使下，这些犯罪行为在某些地区变得猖獗，部分原因是由于不同国家之间打击犯罪这一方面缺乏合作。显然，我们不能因为上述问题来责备人口过多。 Conclusion: In conclusion, over-population is responsible for a series of problems throughout the world, but there are many other issues that can only be tackled with multiple factors considered. 总之，人口过度是造成世界上一系列问题的愿意，但仍有许多其他问题也应道被考虑在内。 考试预测 1.小作文：重点关注曲线图和流程图。 2.大作文：重点关注教育类、社会类及政府职能类话题。 3.重点浏览15、16、17年写作机经，也可借助《高分范文书》以及《剑桥雅思系列》经典旧题来复习。 (责任编辑：jasmine) |
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