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小作文：pie charts 大作文：In many countries, traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has negative effects on both family and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 朗阁名师王玉梅点评 1. 本次考试难度一般。 2. 整体分析： Task1： 静态饼图 主题是关于韩国2003年游戏销量在不同性别，年龄的对比。 注意点：1. 观察静态数据的排序特点。 2. 描述静态数据对比的词组和句式 3. 时态 相关表达： 1)The 最高级 was A which was+数据(with+数据). Next came C and D with 数据and数据 respectively. 2) A was the leading one. B came next/was next/ followed A /took the second place /ranked second with + 数据 3) A led with +数据 …, followed by B which ... 4) A ranked first/took the first place/occupy the first place… 5) The leading one was A which … 6) 最高级 at/with…数据, followed by B at/with…数据 and C at/with …数据. 7) A was the leading ….which … B was close behind. Task 2: 社会文化类话题 题目翻译：在很多国家，传统食物正在被国际快餐所取代。这对家庭和社会有负面影响。你同意不同意? 分析点评：今天的雅思写作task 2属于雅思写作常考话题，对于考生来说，很容易想出素材。同学们可以写单边，分析传统食物正在被国际快餐所取代对家庭和社会的负面影响。 第一段：话题背景+个人观点 第二段：(负面影响一)国际快餐普遍高糖、高盐、高热量，对身体有危害，导致肥胖，从而导致一系列疾病。整个家庭的健康受到影响，从而也增加家庭和社会的经济负担。 第三段：(负面影响二)影响家庭关系，导致人与人之间的疏远。 第四段：(负面影响三):导致文化同化。因为国际快餐取代传统食物，导致世界饮食多样性丢失，从而危及世界文化多样性，因为食物具体体现了传统文化。 第五段：总结段，重述个人观点并延伸。 主体段1： 国际快餐普遍高糖、高盐、高热量，对身体有危害，导致肥胖，从而导致一系列疾病。整个家庭的健康受到影响，从而也增加家庭和社会的经济负担。 In many countries like China, fast food has contributed to a series of severe health hazards. It leads to a growing number of people becoming obese or dangerously obese. It’s not only because international fast foods are high in fat, sugar, salt and calories, but also because fast foods are served in large portions. And those who suffer from obesity tend to suffer from heart disease,diabetes and other diseases more easily than people with healthy weight. 主体段2：国际快餐取代传统食物，可能影响家庭关系，导致人与人之间的疏远。 Besides, fast food can affect family relationships and gives rise to social alienation problem due to the fact that people nowadays don’t eat family meals as frequently as before. They usually prefer international fast food for the convenience it brings. In a general rule, family meals usually offer family members opportunities to get together, preparing traditional food together and communicating with each other, which helps to enhance mutual understanding. If they always eat traditional fast food outside and they probably will become more alienated. 主体段3：导致文化同化。因为国际快餐取代传统食物，导致世界饮食多样性丢失，从而危及世界文化多样性，因为食物具体体现了传统文化。 Additionally, it can pose a threat to the diversity of world cuisines and hence leads to the loss of cultural diversity. Traditional means of food preparation are known for the diversity of ingredients, cooking methods and flavors. Many dishes show the evolution of cuisines in different areas. If fast chains which offer international fast foods like hamburgers, crisps, fried chicken and so on predominate in the world, people will find that the diet becomes progressively monotonous and some traditional recipes will vanish. And as the traditional recipes embody the traditional culture, it will also result in the dying out of traditional culture. 考试预测 1. 小作文：重点关注动态图(柱图、表格)，其次可以关注一下地图题和流程题。 2. 大作文：重点关注教育类、环境类、社会类话题。 3. 重点浏览2017-2019写作机经，雅思写作还会大量重复原题。可借助《雅思高分范文》第8版经典旧题来复习。 (责任编辑：jasmine) |
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