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新托福写作需要了解一点，不是所有的句子都追求长度。一味追求长度可能会导致以下原因：句子可读性比较差；句子容易出现语法错误并破坏句子的准确定。对于基础比较硬的学生，长句子可以是可选的，但对于基础一般的学生切忌尽量表达简洁。具体该注意什么，南京新托福培训——朗阁的杨烨老师亲身传授新托福写作技巧攻略，希望能对大家有帮助。 参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成段落。 有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，从而完成各个段落。写作段落时，要尽可能多地搜集细节来支持主题。下面给考生呈上有关“电视对孩子不良影响”的引言段、各段主题句及结论部分，供大家欣赏参考： Introduction: Television contributions to society, positive and negative, have been debated continually since this piece of technology invaded the average American household in the 1950s. Topic sentences: 1. TV distorts reality by selecting certain kinds of images and omitting others and by portraying people in a stereotyped way. 2. TV affects human relationships as well as behavior by influencing our feelings about ourselves and our expectations for ourselves and others. 3. Exposure to stereotyped presentations can easily influence viewers’ behavior toward unfamiliar people. 4. Perhaps most serious are the effects of information distortions on the child’s self-image. Conclusion: TV programs should demonstrate a realistic lifestyle and a responsible sense of behavior. The many hours children spend in front of the television can obviously influence their view of the world. According to TV, how does the world in fact work ? As a society, we cannot afford the consequences resulting from the distortions of reality portrayed every day in these shows. (责任编辑：admin) |
