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俗话说“题好文一半”，一个好的托福写作开头绝对能够吸引考官的注意，从而让他对你的作文有个好印象，可是，如果你的托福写作开头十分糟糕，那么，它足以危害你的这次托福考试的分数。下面南京朗阁新托福培训中心就为大家整理10大“必扣分”的托福写作开头，大家要谨以为戒哦！ “必扣分”托福写作开头之一：废话连篇不知所云 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。 Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important! “必扣分”托福写作开头之二：语法错误惨不忍睹 典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。 (责任编辑：admin) |
