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托福写作强调逻辑和论证，以整体来评分。但有些同学在平常学习中单单注意逻辑和论证，往往忽视了语言方面的雕琢，考场上在语言方面疏漏多多，那样即便你的思路和论证属于一流， 多也只能得个二流分数。南京朗阁新托福培训中心为您整理托福写作中的七个语法错误，希望大家能规避这些错误。 1. 搭配错误 原：Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent. 改：Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence. 评：这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。 原：Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career. 改：Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career. 评：此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improve the skills，而不是increase the skills. 2. 中式英语 原：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation. 改：Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation. 评：中文习惯说“人们可以容易地吸引老板的注意力”，而英语则习惯说“It’s easier for sb. to…”同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别哦! 3. 重复累赘 原：From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country. 改：From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country. 评：from my point of view和I think重复啦，留一个就好。当然这里建议留下“高级”的from my point of view. 原：There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory. (责任编辑：admin) |
