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新托福写作中常见的错误句子分析

时间:2012-05-04 16:29来源:朗阁小编作者:sailor

       考生在语法方面的错误主要表现为“主谓不一致、可数名词单复数错误、时态错误、限定动词和非限定动词错误”等,此外,还有一些句子层面的常见问题值得我们关注,下面,南京朗阁小编为您整理托福写作句子常见失误例解,希望对您有所帮助。

  1. Run-on Sentences (串句)

  串句是不用连词和标点而把两个(或以上)独立的句子串在一起的错误表达。有些串句是不用任何标点间隔两个甚至多的句子;有些串句是在该用句号时滥用逗号,忽略了英语语言中的逗号本身没有连接句子的功能这一原则。

  例如:

  Rita decided to stop smoking she didn’t want to die of lung cancer。

  The exam was postponed the class was canceled as well。

  ★修改原则

  A.把原句分成两个独立的句子。

  Rita decided to stop smoking. She didn’t want to die of lung cancer。

  The exam was postponed. The class was canceled as well。

  B.用并列连词连接两个句子。

  Rita decided to stop smoking, for she didn’t want to die of lung cancer。

  The exam was postponed, and the class was canceled as well。

  C.用分号连接两个句子。

  Rita decided to stop smoking; she didn’t want to die of lung cancer。

  The exam was postponed; the class was canceled as well。

  2. Fragmentary sentences (破句)

  破句是把不完整的句子当作独立的子句来写作时发生的错误。常见错误包括:从属连词引起的破句,ing分词和不定式结构引起的错误,增添细节引起的破句和缺少主语的破句。

  例如:

  After I arrived in Chicago by bus. I checked into a room. Then I went to a diner to get something to eat。 (责任编辑:admin)

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