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时间:2012-05-04 17:08来源:朗阁小编作者:sailor

       4招教你写出漂亮的托福作文结尾:凤头固然重要,豹尾也不可忽视。一个好的托福作文结尾也会给文章增色不少,让评分老师眼前一亮。今天我们就来看看托福写作结尾段4大招数,教你写出简洁精彩的托福作文结尾,让你的文章脱颖而出。

  引申扩展包括:
  强调反对派立场会带来的后果
  展望未来问题的前景
  强调重要性
  一、重申立场
  “It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”
  In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today’s professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices.
  二、重申立场+总结理由
  “Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.”
  In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction.
  三、让步+重申立场
  “Job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity.”
  In the final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the end, productivity, but also is required by fairness. (责任编辑:admin)

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