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在雅思写作中如何让自己写出的语句有表现力呢？南京雅思培训——朗阁的老师在在这里分享几招增强雅思写作语句表现力的技巧给大家，希望对大家有帮助。 一、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如： 1、 Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form. Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals. 2、 Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall. Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall. 二、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如： Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语) Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语) 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如： 1) Weak: The team members are good players. Revision: The team members play well. 2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness. Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness. 3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如： 1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion. Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists. 2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered. Revision: The books you ordered have arrived. 三、多用语意具体的动词，持句意简洁明了。例如： 1、 Poor: My supervisor went past my desk. Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk. 2、 (责任编辑：admin) |
