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近不少同学在问雅思写作部分有什么技巧？其实我们可以把雅思写作分成三个部分分为开头、中间和结尾，三段都非常重要，但是大家对开头结尾都把握的比较扎实，那么今天我就为大家介绍一下雅思写作的中间部分，要如何写，请看下面的雅思写作技巧。
雅思写作技巧之主体段写作攻略： 主体段落一般由主题句和扩展句构成。主题句一般放在句，是段落核心，用来概括全段内容。主题句分为笼统主题句和具体主题句。笼统主体句的作用是引出 下文，点明方向，具体主题句则概况下面内容的核心主题。仅有主题观点是不够的，还要对其进行论证，也就是围绕主题进行论证，对其进行说明、叙述、举例及论 述。 一、举实例论证。 有些考生在开头提出观点之后，就不知道该如何继续下去。这种情况下，考生可以举实例论证，举例是我们解释论证一个观点 好的方式，也是 有说服力的。 Although sticking to one’s goal is key to success, sometimes one should be ready to give up. Napoleon’s story is a case in point. After Napoleon succeeded in seizing the crown of France, he should have been satisfied with his achievement. But he did not. He went on to conquer the whole Europe. Then after he succeeded in ruling almost the whole Europe, he should have given up this ambition to expanding his empire. But he did not. He went on to invade Russia and there he suffered a total defeat. Later he was sent into exile and died in a lonely island. 本段引用了拿破仑的事迹来加以论证。拿破仑是家喻户晓的人物，而且 后决定拿破仑及其帝国命运的滑铁卢战 役也是大家都知晓的。通过这个例子来说明在适当的时候学会放弃是很有说服力的。在举例时， 好选择一些大家都知晓的，这样才能有说服力。当然考生也可以 用自己的亲身经历来加以论证。 The second reason for my propensity for outdoor activities is that they can build my mind greatly. In sports, one must learn to struggle for the victory, learn to fight with no matter what is left in his body. And one must learn to stick to one’s own confidence and hope, no matter how little the hope may be. And one must learn to accept failure, learn to start again after failure. Long-running and mountain climbing contribute much to this kind of spirits. I will never forget the feeling when I raced to the final line first in a 300-meter running. I could hardly breathe in the last 100 meters. My lungs ached and my legs weighed tons, but there was still one runner in front of me. I gave all my strength to move one foot ahead of the other. When I surpassed him, he gave a cry of surprise, I won at last and I learned much from the race. 文章在提出主题句后，先是加以论述，然后用长跑和爬山作为例子。 后又用自己的亲身经历和感受来论证室外活动可以增强一个人的毅力。 二、用一些研究、调查、发现、科学家及权威人士的观点或组织机构的研究结果加以论证，并引用数据作为支撑。此论证方法的好处就是比较权威客观，有说服力。 If people move to live in different places, they will have more opportunity for improving their lives. According to a survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, 55% of urban Chinese had changed their living place at least once in their lifetime by 2000, an increase of 30 percent as compared with that of 2 decades ago. Chinese sociologists agree that this trend is most likely to continue with the development society. Statistics indicate that people who moved at least once in their lifetime enjoy a much higher living standard than those who never moved. 本段先是引用中科院的调查数据加以论证，然后用某些和数据继续加以论证。 有一点值得注意，很多考生并不知道真实的数据，考试中往往是自己的发明创造。所以没有把握的情况下，尽量不要去写那些众所周知的人或者机构，可以模糊地用 某个机构或某个学者，数据上也千万不要太夸张，只要能达到有力够论证自己的观点即可。 三、通过比较和对比方式来论证，这样两个事物、行为或者观点的利弊就非常明显。 Those who believe in the measure say that students benefit a lot from traveling or working for a year before their formal university education. First, they can more broadly acquainted themselves with the society, deepen their understanding of the outside world, and thus better coordinate their objectives of learning with the needs of the society. In contrast, by immediate entrance to university they can not steer the direction of their study well and may display a poor combination of the theory with practice. Second, study at high school is really exhausting, especially when to win college admission. So it is necessary to grant these children a relatively long period of relaxation or buffer, say, traveling or working for a year, to loosen the chords of their brain, so that when they go back to school later again, they can become completely refreshed and rejuvenated. 这篇文章是关于上大学前是否应该用一年的时间来旅游或者工作进行论证。此段的主题是学生在进入大学学 习之前花一年时间进行旅游或工作的话，会让他们受益匪浅。对比点是：进入大学之前一年进行旅游或工作有利于让学生广泛了解社会，加深他们对外界的理解，因 此能让他们好地协调好学习目标和社会的需要。相对比之下，直接进入大学学习的话，他们不能够把握学习的方向，而且有可能会产生理论和实践相脱节。通过此 番对比，旅游或工作一年对于即将步入大学的学生们的好处是显而易见，段落的主题句得到有力的论证。 四、通过假设进行正反论述。 Then, since the transportation system is the lifeline of a country’s economic activities, its paralysis would lead to the disintegration of the economy, either industry of farming or daylife. Suppose all the means of transportation were halted for lack of oil, factories with insufficient raw materials would have to close, workers would be out of work, and ripe farm crops would have to stay in the fields at the mercy of rain and storms. People would try to store food and the price of all commodities would go up. If we take those power stations run by oil into account, situations would become even worse. In this sense, oil decides the fate of the whole economy and that of the government. 通过假设得出了一系列的可怕的后果， 后再得出结论，这样的结论是发人深省，当然也是 能引起人们广泛重视的。 五、换种说法，换而言之。 The computer technology has no doubt at all replaced most of function, that is, we can read books from the academic database; newspapers and publishes from almost everywhere, this means that we do not need many hard copies and environment friendly for the earth. However I am not so much convinced that public libraries can replace other functions that we need other than providing information or books. 换而言之就是换种方式去解释，使解释加具体直观话，因而能被理解并接受。 以上的内容就是对雅思作文的主体段写作方法的介绍，希望可以给大家带来帮助，如果想了解多相关信息，可以拨打热线:025-83236520 (责任编辑：admin) |
