雅思写作成绩的高低和雅思写作表现力的强弱有很大的关系,因为雅思写作题目大都是议论性质的,所以增强写作的表现力,能够在很大程度生提高雅思写作成绩。本文为想要提高雅思写作分数的考生一个思路,供考生们参考。 雅思写作表现力技巧一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。 这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。 例如: Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语) Or:The landscape,bare and brown,begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语) 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。 例如:1) Weak:The team members are good players. Revision:The team members play well. 2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness. Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness. 3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。 例如: 1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion. Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists. 2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered. Revision:The books you ordered have arrived. 雅思写作表现力技巧二、多用语意具体的动词,持句意简洁明了。 这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。 例如: 1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk. Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk. 2、Poor:She is a careful shopper. Better:She compares prices and quality. 雅思写作表现力技巧三、尽量运用主动语态。 之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。 例如: 1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity. Better:Charity has supported the organization. 2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate. Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 雅思写作表现力技巧四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。 想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。 例如: 1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk. Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk. 2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations. Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation. 3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire. Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire. 4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same,identical dress in different stores. Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores. 雅思写作表现力技巧五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。 这是语言考试,不是专业考试,提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上,是文章的表现力上! 例如: 1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form. Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals. 2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall. Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall. 南京朗阁培训中心老师提醒如需了解雅思报名、雅思考试时间、雅思备考或其他考试相关信息,敬请南京朗阁雅思官网,小编祝各位考生备考顺利!
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