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南京朗阁雅思写作组老师为解析雅思作文高效结尾法。我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必须的，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。我们从例子中开始学习。 首先我们来看一个例子： I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways. 上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子： In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible. 正如大家所见，2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。 后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。朗阁雅思培训的老师分析认为，这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的，加上对于未来的润色，使得表达流畅。用同样的方法，我们再来看第三个例句： To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability. (责任编辑：admin) |
