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2017年10月28 日雅思考试写作回顾

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20171028 日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文:柱图

大作文:Nowadays people can live and work wherever they want because of the improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

朗阁吴凡点评:

1.本次考试难度较小

2.整体分析

Task 1:柱图(动态)

注意:1.动态图注意描述和对比趋势;2.注意时态,看清时间点;3.数据图需要在第二段或者结尾段总结数据的总体特征(overview)

相关表达:

1、…was considerably/slightly larger/lower than …

2、the difference between … and … was barely noticeable

3、…saw a slight/dramatic increase =…increased slightly/dramatically

 

3.Task 2科技类话题

题目翻译:由于通讯和交通技术的进步,现在人们可以在任何地方生活和上班。这样是好处大于坏处吗?

从话题上来说,属于科技类话题,14年旧题,注意论证需要适当展开。

从类型上来说,陈述交通和通讯技术进步对于个人和社会的好与坏,注意立论和驳论的搭配。具体论证过程中注意不要一直重复题目当中的主题词improved communication technology and transport,需要培养替换意识,常用技巧就是具体到通讯设备的进步有什么体现(手机、电脑、网络等),交通技术进步有什么体现(高铁、轻轨、地铁等)

从结构上来说,可以通过五段完成写作任务:

开头段:改写题目+个人观点(好处大于坏处)

立论段:陈述通讯技术进步带来的好处

立论段:陈述交通技术进步带来的好处

驳论段:陈述这些技术进步带来的弊端,并反驳

结尾段:重申个人观点

 

Introduction:

The growing availability of high speed trains and telecommunication devices makes it easier for individuals to work at home or live far away from their workplace. 高速铁路和远程通讯设备的普及让人们在家工作或者让居住地远离工作地点变得容易。Some people may concern that this advance would have negative effects on individuals and society. In my opinion, however, it has far more benefits. 有的人可能担忧这种进步会对个人和社会产生负面影响。但是在我看来,它的好处要多得多。

Body 1:

Ts: This is partly because such communication tools as computers and mobiles present employees with a more convenient option. 这是因为像电脑和手机这样的通讯设备给员工提供了灵活的选择。

Ss: They would not suffer from the traffic congestion in peak hours, thus there would be no worry about their late arrival. 他们就不用忍受早晚高峰的交通拥堵问题,也就不需要担心迟到。When they work at home, schedules could also be individualized as long as their tasks are completed as required, and more time could be spared for physical exercises to alleviate their stress from workload. 他们的时间表也可以制定得人性化,只要在家上班能按要求完成任务。Besides, running cost would be reduced if companies allow their staff to work at home and return the results via emails. 除此之外,如果公司允许员工在家上班并且通过邮件发送结果,公司运营成本也可以降低。

Body 2:

Apart from this, the main concern is about those from underdeveloped areas. 除此之外,(我们)主要关注的还是欠发达地区的人们。When high speed trains are built and maintained between cities, it encourages people from these places to find a better job with higher salaries in major cities. In this way, they could be quickly lifted out of poverty and given a better quality of life. 城市之间建立并维护的高速铁路能鼓励来自这些地区的人们去大城市找到好、工资高的工作,从而他们能快脱离贫困,拥有好的生活质量。In the case of those white collars who prefer idyllic and tranquil life in the countryside, sufficient sky trains and underground system could take them to downtown within one hour. It is also true in the case of young people who prefer the modern lifestyle in central places but cannot afford the expensive rents. 对于喜欢田园宁静生活的白来说,充足的轻轨和地铁能在一小时之内把他们送进闹市区,对喜欢现代生活却支付不起高昂房租的年轻人也是如此。

Body 3:

Ts: In spite of this, the drawbacks of this positive trend cannot be denied. 尽管如此,这一正面发展的弊端还是不能被否认。

Ss: When staff work alone at their houses for a long time, it would reduce connection with their co-workers and increase their isolation with the outside world. 当员工长时间在家独自工作,他们和同事的联系就减少了,就会被外界孤立。However, this could be tackled effectively if regular staff gatherings were thrown, and the sense of belonging could therefore be ensured.但是,举办定期的员工聚会可以有效处理这个问题,并且归属感也能得到证。

Conclusion:

In conclusion, my main point is that it is hard for people to have a more convenient and pleasant lifestyle if they abandon these technologies, but people need to make sure that this should not be at the cost of their social experiences. 后,我的观点是如果抛弃了这些技术,生活很难变得方便或者宜人,但人们还是要这些不能以牺牲他们的社交生活为代价。

考试预测:

1.小作文:重点关注动态图和流程图

2.大作文:重点关注个人生活类、政府类、环境类话题。

3.重点浏览1415年写作机经,也可借助《范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

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